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Shelar
November 24th, 2009, 04:29 PM
I have devoted this thread to my bardic reviews, and other bardic performances that may be posted here by myself or others from time to time.

Of course, comments are nice, too.

First will be my second bardic review performance, followed immediately be telling of the story that was my restring quest from Tokugawa. Eventually I'll post my first bardic performance as well.

Zimmiz arrives from the west.
Shelar chirps happily.

l
The Storytelling Amphitheater
[Exits: west]
You are in a small amphitheater. Several rows of curved marble benches
curl comfortably around a raised dais. The high ceiling and polished
stone walls are shaped to reflect the voice of the speaker at the dais,
letting them be heard throughout the room. An open archway to the west
leads out into a small courtyard.
(White Aura) Zimmiz is here.
Cayleb is resting here.
(Intense Dark Blue Aura) Tokugawa is here.

Cayleb beams a smile at Zimmiz.
Zimmiz grins happily.
Zimmiz utters the words, 'judicandus eugzagz'.
Zimmiz rests.

You say (in common), 'if everybody could disable eating triggers and the like for the duration of the performance, I'd
much appreciate it'.

who
7 players.
Hum [ Th:22 Ra:30 Ma:30 ] Anavrin, stares at stray cats
Hel [ Ra:10 Ma:10 ] Cayleb is trying to wear out his soles *Water*
Aar [ Bard: 16 10 9 ] Shelar Fyshyr, Crested Bard
Hum [ Greater God ] Tokugawa.
Hum [ Cl:23 ] Zimmiz Morgenstern
Elf [ Ra:30 Th:30 Cl:30 ] Zonaso Ral'Ucsav, Iniquitous Lurker of the Conclave
Hlf [ Bard: 21 13 10 ] Whistler lays down some crazy jazz with his trumpet

Tokugawa utters the words, 'judicandus eugzagz'.
You say (in common), 'we can have a mushroom'we can have a mushroom fest first, if Zimmiz is so inclined'.
Shelar raises her crest slightly at Zimmiz.
Cayleb grins mischievously at Zimmiz.
Cayleb drinks water from a delicate emerald crystal goblet.

gl
Zimmiz is resting here.
Cayleb is resting here.
(Intense Dark Blue Aura) Tokugawa is here.

Zimmiz stands up.
Zimmiz utters the words, 'qcandusahz yaae'.
A Magic Mushroom suddenly appears.
Zimmiz utters the words, 'qcandusahz yaae'.
A Magic Mushroom suddenly appears.
Zimmiz utters the words, 'qcandusahz yaae'.
A Magic Mushroom suddenly appears.
You get a Magic Mushroom.
Zimmiz utters the words, 'qcandusahz yaae'.
A Magic Mushroom suddenly appears.
eat mushroom
You eat a Magic Mushroom.
You are full.
Zimmiz utters the words, 'qcandusahz yaae'.
A Magic Mushroom suddenly appears.
Cayleb gets a Magic Mushroom.
Cayleb eats a Magic Mushroom.
Zimmiz rests.
thank zimmiz
You thank Zimmiz heartily.
Cayleb gets a Magic Mushroom.
Cayleb eats a Magic Mushroom.
Cayleb says (in common), 'thanks'.
You say (in common), 'everybody full?'.
Cayleb nods.
You nod at yourself. Are you getting senile?
prelude1
You get a small drum from bag made from sneaky aarakocran guildmaster hide.

You drop a small drum.
Shelar sits on a stool and places a small drum at her feet.
prelude2
Shelar takes out her harp and tunes it.
prelude3
Shelar curls her feet and begins to beat an energetic rhythm on the drum with the back of her talons.
Shelar begins strumming a playful tune on her harp.
Shelar begings singing, her clear voice filling the amphitheatre dramatically.
v1
Shelar sings, 'There is a man who walks the world'
Shelar sings, 'If you saw him you would know.'
Shelar sings, 'Nature's in this shaman's face'
Shelar sings, 'Strength of shark and eye of crow.'
Shelar sings, 'The Dashing Kefka the Shaman.'
v2
Shelar sings, 'The shaman heard a bard had come,'
Shelar sings, 'Nevyn; master of his trade,'
Shelar sings, 'And sought the news the bard might bring,'
Shelar sings, 'Of fallen foes and bounties paid.'
Shelar sings, 'Intrepid Kefka the Shaman.'
v3
Shelar sings, 'As he came through yon Hovelton'
Shelar sings, 'A feathered bardlet he did see,'
Shelar sings, 'Come for to learn the master's lyre;'
Shelar sings, 'For her life now did she flee.'
Shelar sings, 'Heroic Kefka the Shaman'
v4
Shelar sings, 'A grinning human chased the swan'
Shelar sings, 'With murder in his eye.'
Shelar sings, 'The shaman came to tag along,'
Shelar sings, 'And soon watched Guil let fly.'
Shelar sings, 'Save me, Kefka the Shaman!'
v5
Shelar sings, 'The blade, it struck the bardlet true'
Shelar sings, 'She staggered and she fell,'
Shelar sings, 'And in the mighty shaman's arms'
Shelar sings, 'She crooned out her death-knell.'
Shelar sings, 'Handsome Kefka the Shaman.'

Zonaso gossips (in common), 'ahh such weeni'.
v6
Shelar sings, 'He took the body of the bird'
Shelar sings, 'And called the bardlet back'
Shelar sings, 'Returned to her all of her gear,'
Shelar sings, 'and from her hide, a sack.'
Shelar sings, 'The Manly Kefka the Shaman.'
v7
Shelar sings, '"Hey! You bring back that corpse!"'
Shelar sings, 'The killer wailed and cried,'
Shelar sings, '"It rightfully belongs to me'
Shelar sings, '"For by my blade she died."'
Shelar sings, 'Stalwart Kefka the Shaman.'
v8
Shelar sings, 'THe human moaned and uttered threats,'
Shelar sings, 'Though they availed him none.'
Shelar sings, '"You're harrassing little newbie me!"'
Shelar sings, 'But Kefka's deed was done.'

Someone gossips (in common), 'Did you hear what he called you, Tokugawa?'.

Zonaso gossips (in common), 'sorry talkin to myself =)'.
denum
Shelar sings, 'The Dashing...'
Shelar sings, 'Intrepid...'
Shelar sings, 'Heroic...'
Shelar sings, 'Handsome...'
Shelar sings, 'Manly...'
Shelar sings, 'Stalwart...'
Shelar sings, 'Kefka Palazzo the Shaman!'
end1
Shelar ends her song with a drum riff and puts her harp down.
Shelar stands up.
You bow deeply.
end2
Shelar puts her harp away.
You get a small drum.
You put a small drum in bag made from sneaky aarakocran guildmaster hide.
Shelar takes a final look at her audience and walks off the stage.
l
The Storytelling Amphitheater
[Exits: west]
You are in a small amphitheater. Several rows of curved marble benches
curl comfortably around a raised dais. The high ceiling and polished
stone walls are shaped to reflect the voice of the speaker at the dais,
letting them be heard throughout the room. An open archway to the west
leads out into a small courtyard.
( 2) A delicious magic mushroom is here.
Zimmiz is resting here.
Cayleb is resting here.
(Intense Dark Blue Aura) Tokugawa is here.

Tokugawa snickers softly.
Tokugawa says, 'very nice'.

Zimmiz smiles happily.
Shelar sneaks back onstage.
Someone tells you, ':)'.
You received Bards' Council approval for level 10 at 2009-11-24 15:39:25.
Cayleb showers you with confetti!
Zonaso gossips (in common), 'gratz'.
Tokugawa says, 'Congrats'.
You say (in common), 'thanks!'.
Someone tells you, 'Congrats!'.
You tell someone (in common), '*chirps happily* thanks'.
You may again do a mob mastery quest.
Cayleb says (in common), 'we'll have to make suer Kefka hears it!'.
Zimmiz smiles happily.

Shelar
November 24th, 2009, 04:30 PM
Tokugawa says, 'I think you also had a store to tell right?'.
Cayleb nods at himself; he must be getting senile.
You say (in common), 'I also have a story which I have written for a restring quest, if any are curious'.
You nod.
Tokugawa says, 'er, story'.
Tokugawa slays the Typo!
Cayleb says (in common), 'sure!'.
You say (in common), 'I will make sure Kefka sees it, fear not'.
Shelar chirps happily.
Cayleb glares at the demon Opyt.

Shelar clears her throat with a short warble.
story
You say (in common), 'This is the story of how a fruit became a harp.'.
Shelar waits for any snickers to subside.

Tokugawa chuckles, evidently amused.
Cayleb raises an eyebrow.

story1
You say (in common), 'Many generations ago lived a young aarakocran boy named Podin.'.
You say (in common), 'One day a traveling merchant came into town, and his parents'.
You say (in common), 'took the child to the market to see his wares.'.
You say (in common), 'Podin was too small to see over the side of the merchant's'.
You say (in common), 'wagon, so his mind wandered a great deal as he stood by his'.
You say (in common), 'parents' side while they shopped. In fact, very little could'.
You say (in common), 'have been done to make the trip more boring, until a single'.
You say (in common), 'phrase made the youngsters crest rise in curiosity.'.

story2
You say (in common), '"...throw in some musical fruit," the merchant had offered.'.
You say (in common), 'Musical fruit? Podin pondered. What's that? I hope we get'.
You say (in common), 'some!'.
You say (in common), 'But alas, it was not to be. His mother quickly and firmly'.
You say (in common), 'announced that they did not want any musical fruit in their'.
You say (in common), 'home, and the fascinating fruits were not brought up again.'.

story3
You say (in common), 'Disappointed, Podin was soon taken home again, and as quickly'.
You say (in common), 'as he could, he went over to visit his friend, Tena. Tena was'.
You say (in common), 'much wiser than Podin, for she was two whole years older than'.
You say (in common), 'he. Podin figured she'd know what the musical fruit was. Even'.
You say (in common), 'If she didn't, at least she'd be able to see it on the wagon'.
You say (in common), 'when her parents brought her. Which of course would happen;'.
You say (in common), 'strangers almost never came through the backwater areas in'.
You say (in common), 'which Podin lived, so _everybody_ was sure to go at least to'.
You say (in common), 'see what this one had for sale.'.

story4
You say (in common), 'Sure enough, Tena had been to see the merchant, and she had'.
You say (in common), 'been able to see over the wagon's side (although she'd had to'.
You say (in common), 'stand on tip-talons to do it). Tena hadn't heard anything'.
You say (in common), 'about musical fruits, but she'd remembered a lot of things on'.
You say (in common), 'the merchants wagons: seeds, beans, cloth, jewelery, and one'.
You say (in common), 'kind of fruit.'.

story5
You say (in common), 'That had to be the musical fruits! Podin thought to himself, so'.
You say (in common), 'he pressed Tena for as many details as she could remember.'.
You say (in common), 'The fruit was light green, Tena said, like the colour when you'.
You say (in common), 'have a sliver in your skin too long. And it was big, with just'.
You can't do that here.
-->this was supposed to be the line: 'a little bit of a sweet smell coming from it.'

story6
You say (in common), 'Years passed, and the musical fruit had captured young'.
You say (in common), 'Podin's imagination so much that he couldn't get it out'.
You say (in common), 'of his head. His parents had been so disapproving of the'.
You say (in common), 'musical fruits when the merchant had brought them up that'.
You say (in common), 'he couldn't bring them up with them, but he took every'.
You say (in common), 'chance he could to go out into the woods and try to find the'.
You say (in common), 'mysterious large green fruits.'.

story7
You say (in common), 'Eventually he decided that the musical fruits would not be'.
You say (in common), 'found in the wilds around his tiny hamlet, so he set out to'.
You say (in common), 'explore the world and find out where this fruit might grow'.
You say (in common), 'By this time, Podin was a young adult in his prime and he'.
You say (in common), 'struck a striking figure as he flew across the treetops or'.
You say (in common), 'along the great Tiber river.'.

story8
You say (in common), 'As he wandered, the determined aarakocran nearly gave in on'.
You say (in common), 'several occasions, for he was by this time half convinced'.
You say (in common), 'that there was no musical fruit. Yet this same conviction'.
You say (in common), 'made him even more determined that if a musical fruit did'.
You say (in common), 'exist, he would find it.'.
You say (in common), 'As he nearly despaired of finding his fruit one day, he'.
You say (in common), 'overflew a large patch of odd-looking vines with pale green'.
You say (in common), 'fruits on them, about the size of his head.'.

story9
You say (in common), 'They weren't quite what Podin had envisioned, for in his'.
You say (in common), 'imagination the fruit were bloated and sickly looking, the'.
You say (in common), 'colour of an infected wound. These were smooth, and looked'.
You say (in common), 'almost like they had a grass stain that someone had almost'.
You say (in common), 'been able to wash out, but a trace of the colour stubbornly'.
You say (in common), 'clung to the hard skin of the melons.'.

story10
You say (in common), 'It was the only thing he had ever seen that came close to his'.
You say (in common), 'childhood friend's description of the musical fruits, so it'.
You say (in common), 'had to be the right one. Podin did an immediate wingover and'.
You say (in common), 'dove into the vines, immediately grabbing two of the fruits'.
You say (in common), 'and breaking them off their vines. Convinced, but still'.
You say (in common), 'wanting to be sure, he smelled the air carefully.'.

story11
You say (in common), 'Sure enough, he could catch a a fairly faint yet sweet odor'.
You say (in common), 'in the air. Excited, Podin wanted to start trying to figure'.
You say (in common), 'out why the fruits were magical, but the smell in the air'.
You say (in common), 'reminded him of how hungry he was, so he broke one of them'.
You say (in common), 'open and began to eat. Once he learned to scoop the white'.
You say (in common), 'seeds out first, the darker green flesh of the musical fruits'.
You say (in common), 'was delicious, and in short order he'd eaten both.'.

Zimmiz stands up.
story12
You say (in common), 'Once he was satiated, Podin's curiosity kicked in full force'.
You say (in common), 'He tried singing, warbling, drumming, and anything else that'.
You say (in common), 'he could think of that might be musical, but he found his'.
You say (in common), 'substantial ability hadn't improved in the slightest. He'.
You say (in common), 'picked another fruit and tried singing to it, which yielded'.
You say (in common), 'no results. He tried drumming on the fruit, but that didn't'.
You say (in common), 'produce any spectacular sounds and his talons soon pierced'.
You say (in common), 'the fruit's tough skin.'.

Tokugawa says, 'oh no...'.
Tokugawa says, 'I think I see where this is going'.
Tokugawa snickers softly.

Cayleb grins mischievously.
story13
You say (in common), 'It hadn't made any kind of music when he'd broken it open,'.
You say (in common), 'could it make a difference if it was cut?'.
You say (in common), 'Podin took out his spear and sliced through the fruit.'.
You say (in common), 'Nothing'.
You say (in common), 'He cut through it the other way'.
You say (in common), 'Still nothing'.
You say (in common), 'He spend the entire day trying to prompt the melons to show'.
You say (in common), 'their musicality, and went to bed his search fruitless and'.
You say (in common), 'his inspiration gone.'.

story14
You say (in common), 'The next morning he took a couple of the biggest, ripest of'.
You say (in common), 'the musical fruits and flew across the nearby loch to the'.
You say (in common), 'town he had heard on his way up the river. Nydia was a very'.
You say (in common), 'small town compared to what it is today, but it seemed huge'.
You say (in common), 'to the inexperienced Podin. He brought his fruits to the'.
You say (in common), 'village square and proceeded to ask anyone he came across'.
You say (in common), 'what made the melons musical'.

story15
You say (in common), 'Everyone he asked either laughed uproariously or patted him'.
You say (in common), 'on the head and told him he was a silly bird. Not one person'.
You say (in common), 'took him seriously. Incensed, Podin took his melons and'.
You say (in common), 'headed back to the patch of musical fruit vines. He was more'.
You say (in common), 'determined than ever that he would unlock the secret of the'.
You say (in common), 'fruits, and the Nydians wouldn't help them, then that was'.
You say (in common), 'just fine by him!'.

story16
You say (in common), 'Months he camped by the vines and months he tried to find'.
You say (in common), 'the secret of the musical fruits, but always it eluded him.'.
You say (in common), 'Until one day a gnome came by his camp and asked what he was'.
You say (in common), 'doing. Expecting to be ridiculed once more, Podin answered'.
You say (in common), 'tersely, but honestly. When the gnome didn't laught or'.
You say (in common), 'patronize him, but asked a few more questions, Podin opened'.
You say (in common), 'up to him and explained the whole story.'.

story17
You say (in common), '"You have indeed found musical fruits" the gnome said when'.
You say (in common), 'Podin had finished his story, but only a very special song'.
You say (in common), 'will open the musicality of these Honeydew.'.
You say (in common), 'With that the gnome picked one of the largest, ripest fruits'.
You say (in common), 'off the vines, and began to sing an odd but soothing song the'.
You say (in common), 'likes of which Podin had never heard before.'.

-->at this point I did not have the rest of the story alias'd, so I typed the end manually
You say (in common), 'The fruit began to change in the effect of the gnomes song'.
You say (in common), 'it split in half, and one half began to change'.
You say (in common), 'it slowly became thinner, the strings between the seeds darkenening'.
You say (in common), 'and the seeds itself moving up into the flesh'.
You say (in common), 'as Podin watched, the fruit began to take the form of a harp, but tiny'.
You say (in common), 'small enough to fit into ones hands or a small backpack'.
You say (in common), 'the flesh and skin of the fruit became shiny, and the seeds almost as white gems, linked to'.
You say (in common), 'the strings of the harp, tuning keys'.
You say (in common), 'then the gnome handed Podin the other half of the fruit and told him to eat it.'.
You say (in common), 'thereby linking himself to the travel harp'.
You say (in common), 'so that he could never lose it'.
You say (in common), 'and it is said that if any of his bloodline ever sought out the fruit again,'.
You say (in common), 'that they could find the song, and that the harp would reform for them'.
You say (in common), 'the same harp, worn and well-loved, '.

Cayleb disappears into the void.

g fruit hawk
You get a cloven fruit from bag made from redtailed hunting hawk hide.
You say (in common), 'and so I have sought out the honeydew, and have cloven it as the song required'.

Cayleb has returned from the void.
Cayleb tells you (in common), 'reproducing harps!'.
Tokugawa grins happily.
Cayleb claps at your performance.
Tokugawa shows his approval by clapping his hands together.
Tokugawa says, 'nice story'.
Zimmiz smiles at you.
Cayleb nods in recognition to you.
Cayleb nods in recognition to Tokugawa.
Tokugawa says, 'afk a minute'.
Cayleb says (in common), 'a very fascinating story'.
You say (in common), 'It took some time to research the tale, so I had to scour the Aran and aracity libraries for
it'.
Cayleb snickers softly.
Tokugawa says, 'back'.
Cayleb says (in common), 'wb'.
You cheer enthusiastically at the way things are going.
Tokugawa says, 'do you know what you want it to be called?'.
Cayleb raises an eyebrow.
You say (in common), 'Called 'a well-worn travel harp''.
Cayleb gets a Magic Mushroom.
Cayleb eats a Magic Mushroom.
Tokugawa says, 'let me see the item to be restrung?'.
You say (in common), 'looks like 'this tiny harp looks decidedly fruity' when sitting on the ground'.
You give a cloven fruit to Tokugawa.
Zimmiz utters the words, 'hfjz gzzuio'.
Tokugawa gives you a well-worn travel harp.
Zimmiz utters the words, 'fido'.
Tokugawa says, 'that look right?'.
Zimmiz waves happily.
Zimmiz leaves west.

l harp
This tiny harp looks decidedly fruity.

You say (in common), 'that looks excellent, thanks!'.

bow tokugawa
You bow before him.
Tokugawa says, 'grin'.
hug tokugawa
You hug him.
Shelar chirps happily.
Tokugawa says, 'enjoy!'.
You say (in common), 'I will!'.

hold fruit
You do not have that item.

hold harp
You hold a well-worn travel harp in your hands.

exam harp
This tiny harp looks decidedly fruity.
You see the following faint symbols: [|AC 1 chr:2 2#]

Tokugawa grins happily.
Tokugawa waves happily.
Shelar tunes her new travel harp happily.
You wave.
Tokugawa snickers softly.
Tokugawa vanishes.
Shelar playes a tuneful melody on her new travel harp.

who
3 players.
Hel [ Ra:10 Ma:10 ] Cayleb is trying to wear out his soles *Water*
Aar [ Bard: 16 10 9 ] Shelar Fyshyr, Crested Bard
Hum [ Cl:23 ] Zimmiz Morgenstern

You tell Zimmiz (in common), 'thanks for attending'.
You tell Cayleb (in common), '*grin* thanks'.
Fare thee well!

Shelar
November 24th, 2009, 04:36 PM
11 players.
Aar [ Bard: 11 6 4 ] Shelar Feathered Bardlet
Gia [ Sh: 2 ] Rastar the Giant
Sah [ Wa: 7 Cl:15 ] Kipper Alystae swims the Nexian seas.
Hum [ Greater God ] Tokugawa.
Elf [ Th:24 Ra:30 Ma:30 ] Haight, G <----The Grey----> E Ashbury.
Ogr [ Wa: 7 ] Corpsemourn the Ogre
Hum [ Th:19 Sh:20 Ra:20 ] Rancor, De-preventing the forest *FIRE* !*&
Sah [ Cl:29 ] Finley: Over time, WATER rules. *KotE*
Hum [ Lesser Goddess ] DarkClaw: Deloi, Vindr, Brisingr, Adurna - Gath!(ERF)
Gno [ Wa:27 Sh:28 ] Lycron, Master of the Trade Winds. *KotE*
Elf [ Wa:30 Ma:30 Th:30 ] Nicholai Ancient Kindred Element of Fire

You tell Tokugawa (in aarakocran), 'Greetings!'.
You tell DarkClaw (in common), 'Tokugawa's on! *dance*'.
You tell DarkClaw (in common), 'now whether or not he's free for a performance...'.
DarkClaw tells you, 'I hope so!'.
You tell DarkClaw (in common), 'it would make things faster for me levelling'.
DarkClaw tells you, '*nodnod*'.
Tokugawa tells you, 'hi!'.
You tell Tokugawa (in common), '*gulp* Are you up for a Bardic performance tonight, m'Lord?'.
You tell Tokugawa (in common), '*grin*'.
You tell Tokugawa (in common), 'It's very good to see you again, btw. Even if you're not free.'.
Tokugawa tells you, 'just checking something, :)'.
Tokugawa tells you, 'thanks, do I know you?'. <-- I completely missed this question, so didn't answer it :(
Tokugawa tells you, 'come to the Storytelling Amphitheater when ready'.

<travels to Amphitheater>

<171hp(171) 157ma(157) 210mv(2538) 2047gp ft: none sp: [commn] >
The Storytelling Amphitheater
[Exits: west]
You are in a small amphitheater. Several rows of curved marble benches
curl comfortably around a raised dais. The high ceiling and polished
stone walls are shaped to reflect the voice of the speaker at the dais,
letting them be heard throughout the room. An open archway to the west
leads out into a small courtyard.
(Intense Dark Blue Aura) Tokugawa is here.

Tokugawa snickers softly.

You bow before him.
Tokugawa says, 'Hello'.
You say (in common), 'Hello'.

Shelar mutters that there is absolutely NO reason for her to be nervous.
Tokugawa chuckles, evidently amused.
You say (in common), 'should I gossip out an invite for whomever might like to attend?'.
Tokugawa gossips, 'sure'.
Shelar nibbles on a feather.

People near you:
Shelar
Tokugawa
DarkClaw
Frostbite

You gossip (in common), 'If anyoen would like to attend my first Bardic Performance, it's starting approximately now in the storytelling Amphitheater'.
You gossip (in common), 'Feel free to join us'.
DarkClaw gossips, 'Yay!'.
Grindel arrives from the west.
Grindel rests.
DarkClaw emerges from a thick layer of mist as it dissipates and seeps into the ground, a soft whisper filling the area.
Eldric rests.
Eldric smiles happily.
Shelar's feathers flatten nervously as she looks out across the audience.
Shelar pulls out a small travel harp and begins to tune it.
Eldric stands up.
Rastar arrives from the west.
Rastar says (in common), 'I found it!'.
Tokugawa says, 'whee!'.
You grin wickedly at him.
DarkClaw says, 'Toku, could you give Rastar a ride?'.
You cheer him on, confident in his abilities.


Miki arrives from the west.
Miki smiles happily.
You chuckle.
Rastar laughs.

Rastar disappears in a mushroom cloud.
Rastar arrives from a puff of smoke.
DarkClaw says, 'nevermind.'.
DarkClaw laughs.
Someone gossips (in common), 'wow 16 players on!!'.
DarkClaw says, 'Didn't realize he found it.'.
Tokugawa giggles.
DarkClaw says, 'Sorry.'.
You say (in common), 'Rastar got nuked!'.
DarkClaw gossips, 'Come listen to Shelar's performance.'.
Tokugawa says, '*poof* *poof*'.
Rastar says (in common), 'ROFL'.
Eldric rests.

Shelar begins plucking at the strings of her harp.
Rastar rests.
DarkClaw says, 'Sorry, Rastar!'.
DarkClaw grins mischievously.

You say (in common), 'This is a song I wrote, which I call 'The Return''.

Tirpitz arrives from the west.

Shelar begins to play a simple melody.
Shelar's feathers start to relax as she looses herself in the music.
You raise your clear voice towards the sky.
You say (in common), 'Some have come'.
You say (in common), 'Some have gone'.
You say (in common), 'A few hremain the same'.
You say (in common), 'And now are those that come again'.
You say (in common), 'Anew to make their name'.

You say (in common), 'Oh, the re3alm, she's changed'.
You say (in common), 'Old friends gone'.
You say (in common), 'New friends found again'.
You say (in common), 'But it is true'.
You say (in common), 'Though some may rue'.
You say (in common), 'The more things change'.
You say (in common), 'The more they stay the same'.

DarkClaw nods in recognition to you.

Shelar's music changes, becoming haunted.
You say (in common), 'In ancient times'.
You say (in common), 'In ages past'.
You say (in common), 'A pantheon that did not last'.
You say (in common), 'The Blues had Tripper, Wylin too'.
You say (in common), 'Bliss and Katrana had scarlet hue'.
You say (in common), 'Whitehawk sampled the rainbow true'.
Rastar chuckles, evidently amused.
You say (in common), 'And the FoLK followed Lady Clue'.
You say (in common), 'The final sentry, purple Fate'.
You say (in common), 'But even Cordir's gone, of late'.
You say (in common), 'Gryphon held the good of Nash'.
DarkClaw sniffs sadly.
You say (in common), 'And many fell by Conclave's lash'.
You say (in common), 'Boromir stays, but cannot ditch'.
You say (in common), 'The ghastly voice of the Arch-Lich'.

You say (in common), 'Old friends gone'.
You say (in common), 'New friends found again'.
You say (in common), 'But it's true'.
You say (in common), 'Though some may rue'.
You say (in common), 'The more things change'.
Eldric shows his approval by clapping his hands together.
You say (in common), 'The more they stay the same'.
Grindel shows his approval by clapping his hands together.

Shelar changes key and the song becomes more longing.
You say (in common), 'In ancient times, in days gone by'.
You say (in common), 'Many sought for your death cry'.
You say (in common), 'Orgrim slew the young who grew'.
You say (in common), 'Around a corner Vex would come'.
Miki has lost his link.
You say (in common), 'And wish would SQUISH all lesser skum'.
You say (in common), 'But Noctus would go anywhere'.
DarkClaw giggles.
You say (in common), 'XP'ing in the void'.
Tokugawa chuckles, evidently amused.
You say (in common), 'Tranquility RP'd alone'.
You say (in common), 'Or in the Bardic Circle'.
Shelar's feathers ruffle briefly at the lack of rhyme there.
You say (in common), 'In the bakcground Pitt would hide'.
Grindel grins mischievously.
You say (in common), 'The quiet, master birdman'.
You say (in common), 'Retired Okk would laugh and mock'.
You say (in common), 'With wit that tickled Aslan'.
You say (in common), 'While Garland fought and Tyrell died'.
You say (in common), 'Friends tested in Realm's tide'.

You say (in common), 'Oh, the Realm, she's changed'.
You say (in common), 'Old friends gone'.
You say (in common), 'New friends found again'.
You say (in common), 'But it is true''.
You say (in common), 'Though some may rue'.
You say (in common), 'The more things change, '.
You say (in common), 'The more they stay the same'.

Shelar's song become mor4e playful, teasing.
You say (in common), 'In ancient times, '.
You say (in common), 'in months of yore'.
You say (in common), 'Those who gathered natures lore'.
You say (in common), 'Saw potions glowing, curing blind'.
Eldric smiles happily.
You say (in common), 'Silver and gold, a boon in kind'.
You say (in common), 'No damage cap there was at first'.
You say (in common), 'Ogres ANNIHILATED ones they'd curesd'.
Someone is so excited that he cheers just for the hell of it.
You say (in common), 'To group you'd need to meet at Took'.
Eldric stands up.
You say (in common), 'And baldrics always worth a look'.

You say (in common), 'Oh, the Realm, she's changed'.
You say (in common), 'Old friends gone'.
You say (in common), 'New friends found again'.
You say (in common), 'But it is true'.
You say (in common), 'Though some may rue'.
You say (in common), 'The more things change'.
You say (in common), 'The more they stay the same'.

Shelar's song becomes lively.
You say (in common), 'And now, today, we find ourselves'.
You say (in common), 'The world more sparce,'.
You say (in common), 'But now no less harsh'.
You say (in common), 'We stil find help from men and elves'.
You say (in common), 'as we go out on dungeon delves'.
You say (in common), 'Newbies, Price does help equip'.
You say (in common), 'Whele Snarge CR's across a ship'.
You say (in common), 'Dalycia and others learn and grow'.
You say (in common), 'Dekuin, Henry, share all they know'.
You say (in common), 'Haight and Homocide trade galore'.
You say (in common), 'And Corri ID's on a distant short'.
You say (in common), 'Isolas went from blue to NAsh'.
You say (in common), 'While into trees the young still crash'.
You say (in common), 'Cytoxan is Seraph's bane'.
You say (in common), 'Magenta potions make us sane'.
Miki disappears into the void.
You say (in common), 'Oh, the Realm, she's changed'.
You say (in common), 'Old friends gone'.
You say (in common), 'New friends found again'.
You say (in common), 'But it is true,'.
You say (in common), 'Thouhg some may rue'.
You say (in common), 'The more things change''.
You say (in common), 'The more they stay the same'.
Tirpitz disappears into the void.
Gala appears out of nowhere.

Shelar's harp fads into a final denument.
You curtsey to your audience.
Grindel claps at your performance.
Gala wiggles his bottom.
DarkClaw claps at your performance.
Rastar shows his approval by clapping his hands together.
Rastar claps at your performance.
Tirpitz has returned from the void.
Tokugawa claps at your performance.
Shelar's feathers flatten again.
You bow deeply.
DarkClaw says, 'Very nice, Shelar!'.
Tokugawa says, 'very nice, you far exceeded the requirement for this level.'.
You received Bards' Council approval for level 5 at 2009-08-21 19:29:39.
Shelar chirps happily.
DarkClaw is so excited that she cheers just for the hell of it.
You cheer enthusiastically at the way things are going.
Tokugawa says, 'Congratulations'.
Gala says (in common), 'ok everyone, spell up!'.
You say (in common), 'thanks'.
DarkClaw says, 'Unfortunately, you can't shoot for two levels at once.'.
DarkClaw winks suggestively at you.
Grindel grins mischievously.
You chuckle.
Grindel stands up.
Rastar laughs.
You say (in common), 'thank you all for attending'.
Tokugawa tells you, 'we should put that on the timeline'.
Someone says (in common), 'no worries, Toku promised all 1 mil gold for coming'.
Tokugawa says, 'yes, I take 1 million from you.'.
Tokugawa says, 'hand it over'.
DarkClaw grins mischievously.
Tokugawa winks suggestively.
Someone points at Grindel accusingly.
You chuckle.
Someone says (in common), 'go ahead!'.
You throw back your head and cackle with insane glee!

Tirpitz is here.
(Intense Dark Blue Aura) Tokugawa is here.
Rastar is resting here.
(Intense Light Purple Aura) DarkClaw is here.
Grindel is here.

DarkClaw waves happily.
DarkClaw grins and bares her fangs. Tendrils of fog rise from the ground, twisting their way up and around her form to shroud it from view.
You tell Tokugawa (in common), 'Many thanks for judging me, m'Lord'.
Tokugawa tells you, 'hm, you're still level 4 though.'.
Tokugawa tells you, 'You're Welcome'.
You tell Tokugawa (in common), 'didn't meet the other requirements for level 5 yet'.
Tokugawa tells you, 'ah'.
You tell Tokugawa (in common), 'still mobms and lqs and mobhunts to do yet'.
Tokugawa tells you, 'ok'.

<-- I'm guessing most bards aren't as excited as I was to do their reviews first?

Whistler
January 12th, 2010, 06:00 PM
Love your work, keep it up